by Alexandra Jade Brewer Sep 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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Thinking about the night as I'm |
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This one you have is really cute as well |
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This is a nicely penned piece. Personal, decent fluidity, good story told. There are a few grammatical errors, such as: |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
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Aww. thats sucks, not being able to have someone you want. mmm. |