Superhero

This kind of reminds me of comic book superheroes! My absolute favorite is Batman and always will be! That aside, this was a wonderful poem! 5/5

Ha! Awesome subject. A unique approach that I enjoyed, pretty fluid, and held good description.

A really fun piece to read.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

I thought it was very cute

"My bionic ears detects" << Take off the (s) In detects.

"Super natural strength
my ability to save lives"

^^ After strength put a semi-colon [[strength; my]]

This was another great poem, I noticed it was the same as the other one though. [[Not word wise, emotion wise, or whatever]] But, it's three stanzas with 4 lines. That kind of bothers me, I like stuff that's different each time.
Though, I do this as well.. Lol.

Amazing poem, though. I enjoyed it, a lot. Ending was great. (:

5.5

I love it, great work !