You Make Me

by Pete   Sep 21, 2007


I love you so much,
You make me feel safe.
You make me feel normal,
When my life's a disgrace.
You can calm me down,
When I start to get mad.
You make me so happy,
When all the good turns to bad.
You help me to focus,
When it all goes so wrong.
When I feel weak,
You help me feel strong.
You make me outgoing,
When I'm normally shy.
You answer my questions,
When I've no idea why.
You right all my wrongs,
When I'm feeling ashamed.
You're a wondrous feeling,
That's beyond being named.
You help me to talk,
When I lose use of my voice.
When I'm unsure what to do,
You help me make the right choice.
You're there if I need you,
I want you every night.
You never feel wrong for me,
It's always so right.
You're my shelter, my cover,
When I need somewhere to hide.
You're that tingling feeling,
That's deep down inside.
You've been a part of my life,
since I'd just turned 18.
When I'm invisible,
You make me be seen.
You quench a deep thirst,
When I need something fast.
You make me your first,
When I should be your last.
You're something so special,
That I hold so dear.
You're a beautiful thing,
My cold pint of beer.

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  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Hahaha. that was a funny ending. Man...what a way to turn the feeling around. hahaha Well, that most be one very special beer you got there. I think some people call that addiction. LOL Just kidding. nice piece!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by tulip2dreams

    Great poem really unexpected ending ... great work..keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by dreamer88

    I love the ending it just made me smile, but totally can relate, i was reading it to begin and thought, this guy is in love, (yer with his beer) lol
    truly great piece of work...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by kira2

    Wow, I love this -
    The whole time I thought, it must be such a great love and then the end came and I laughed, yet completely understood

  • 16 years ago

    by Insanity

    O my god I love your wrighting, it makes you look forward to something differnt, and then you jump out in the last line and turn the hole meaning around