You killed me

by BeLLa   Sep 22, 2007


You stabbed me in the back
when you told me you cheated

You broke my heart
when you hit me for not being her

You cut my wrists wen you
said you wanted me to die

You cut parts of my face
When you said i was ugly

You made me bleed
When you forced yourself inside

You slit my throat
and ended my life

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  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    That was an amazing poem it had all the elements and overall it rocked!!5/5= )

    Cory

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Wen=When

    THis was pretty deep I must say, quite morbid and depressing. Although the thoughts are all mixed here sounds like a girl that has had alot of sadness thrown into her life. Seems as though she wasn't treated nicely in more ways then one. You not only wrote this poem for yourself but for others to read.. I'm sure people can relate to this. Well done. Keep writing. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Sad. but full of emotion.
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Omg so dark so aweful so morbid 5/5 :(

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