The silence seems so loud

by Mandy Grace   Sep 22, 2007


The cold linoleum floor makes me shiver as i cut deep into my wrists with a sharp razor. it burns but only for a second. i watch the blood trickle to the ground. the red blood on the white floor bright and yet so dark. i slice the skin a second time tears roll down each cheek. so much pain so much anger. i can't control it anymore. why does it have to be like this? the walls seem to be closing in my head feels as if its heavy enough to burst. i can't stand this. the silence seems so loud. i reach over the blood soaked rag and turn on music. i lay on my side, my cheek on the cold floor listening intently to the beats. letting them run through me. no one will ever understand. no one will ever notice that i am gone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiNa

    Great poem, i like how i can like picture it in my mind like im there right now.

  • 16 years ago

    by DannieDemon

    Wow. this is really... unique. in a good way. there are alot of emotions put into this...

  • 16 years ago

    by MeeyCie

    Great poem. I feel that all the time. But I hasnt done it. If I had somebody would have notice. sure, I have hurt my self but not like cutting. I did marks on my arm with razors and stuff like that but never cutting. but I understands you but we all know that it just helps for a little time. but great poem anyway

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Awww what a sad poem.....i feel like that alot.....good job

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Wow powerrful ican totally relate to this!!great job.5/5

    Cory