Giving it a go

by June   Sep 22, 2007


My partner now knows I don't love him ,
and there is someone else I have feelings for.
Yet still he says he loves me very much ,
and wants things to be how they were before.
Since everything came out into the open ,
there have been days we've talked all night.
He says hes partly to blame and has pushed me away ,
wants a chance to change and put things right.
I'm giving him the chance he wants ,
because I owe to the kids to give it a go.
The kids are my life and its them who keep me strong ,
maybe one day my feelings for my partner will once again grow.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    Hi June

    This is a good writting, but it's more like a confession than a poem. You can get much more out of your poems if you can describe how it makes you feel. I hope this helps you. I did enjoy it.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    June dear, what a poems you penned here, this was Beautiful expressed emotions... even though simply but this one can't describe within word.... breathtaking written!