Vices

by Veamm   Sep 22, 2007


Vices

As eyes start searching
for a perfect health
Our world is suffocated
by the people's wealth

The Windows of insanity
creates eternal demise
Those empty hands yearn
hungers for the price

People desperate acts
creates fancy desires
Uncontrolled emotions
adopted such mere vice

    report violation
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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This has to be the best one I've read so far. whike being relatively short you managed to put so much emotion in. i loved the ending to this..so powerful and filled with such intensity that it's like a slap in the face for the reader..beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Internal Hatred

    Great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    I think this is a well written piece, unique and strong. The flow was a bit rocky for me, but it was pleasure to read.

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

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