Make me believe

by tara   Sep 22, 2007


Ive been felling high.
ive been feeling low.
waiting for a hand to hold.

so im waiting here.
grab my hand or someone pul me up,
i dont need a hero.
but i dont want to be alone.

i know that i can be stronger.
but i dont wanna be strong tonight.
and you dont need to make everything alright.

just make me feel.
like im beautifull.

lifes let me fly.
lifes made me crawl.
learned to balance on shaky ground.
i dont need your rescuing.
just help me to believe again.

i dont know what went wrong.
or how ive been giong on,
ive been spinning roun and round.
running through these ups and downs.

i just want to feel alright.
to spent one perfect night.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was good, the flow was okay and you have potential.
    Love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Very interesting form, very..out of the norm so to say, and you rocked it, very well written, theres a lot of emotion..i love how you changed every stanza up, made it flow nicely and kept it refreshing, keep up the good work

    andrew

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica

    I really like it! thanx for commenting my poem. i'll take it to heart. Keep up your good work. I just started so I really look up yo you!
    xxm0nicaxx

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