I do my best

by tara   Aug 28, 2007


No matter what I do
Its never good enough for you
Im trying to be everything that you need
but youre still not happy
after all I have done
and all I have become

I know your dreams, I know your cries
each breath I have memorized

the thoughts that we dont share
walking in the same room but breathe different air
what more can I give
more then life, more than this
more than whats in these two hands
but I cant give more than I am

even if I try, and really do my best
you only talk about the rest

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  • 16 years ago

    by Eri

    Omg I love this one
    I have been in that situation b4

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    OMG, wow this was beautiful and unexpected. I really loved it, the flow was amazing! =]

  • 16 years ago

    by njabulo b

    This is a nice poem again, and you are saying the facts there, u cant give more than whats you have, i know its so bad when you give all your heart to some andhe dont return it to you so your poem rings a bell in my heart something i ever experiance. Nice one.

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Well done Tara well done.... very emotional piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by GothaX

    Hey Tara,

    Dit is echt een goed gedicht :D

    Zeker netjes. Elk woord heeft zijn waarde.
    Ik geef je zeker een dikke 5 :D

    Spreek je snel ;-)

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