Love and hate that fades away

by santino   Sep 23, 2007


I can feel love, that fades away
as it slowly converts into hate
hate that grows
grows and grows,
every day
nothing is done
when a loved one goes away
as that love converts to hate
witch we hate to feel
as we want to love
as things unreveal
i can hear the silence
the silence of every day
i can here the peaceful
sound of silence that fades away
i cant regret what i
felt one day
as a loved one went away, i can not
deny that i felt hate grab my heart
like vines
vines with spines i cant Deny
as those vines
grew more and more
now growing little fruits
of love i must accept,
my love grows bigger and bigger every day
as i speak to my loved one
the one that went away
i cant regret what i felt one day
that o so ever special day
the day i met my loved one
the loved one that went away
not knowing i would
feel again what i felt that day
in witch i met her,
fade away
silence came
coming and grabbing my mind
i was lost in darkness
love and hate
not yet knowing the things
that awaited the day in witch silence would go away....

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  • 16 years ago

    by A Fallen Angel

    So this poem was good but once again gramamtical errors... i did find a word in there that kinda had me thinking for a moment. haha it was "unreveal" i was thinking maybe unveil would be a better word... it means the same and is actually the more correct term. but yeah you just have to go through and pick out the words that are used wrong... but in time those things will come to you. you are a good writer for someone so young.

    A.