I'll Be Around...

by Jenna   Sep 23, 2007


Take that smirk off your ugly face,
I'm not afraid to stand up anymore to you,
your nothing,
a women beater,
you deserve to feel some pain,
for the things you did,
torturing me.

I'll mess you up, thats not a threat,
its a promise,
I'm not taking sh*t anymore from you,
I'll take you down.
To many times, I covered up what you've done,
I'm not going to let you get away with it,
Your life's over,
its done.

To many times,
I cried and hide away in fear,
Not any more,
I'm done,
Sick and tired of acting like a child,
I'm dealing with what you've to my innocence.

watch your back,
I'll Be Around...are you ready?
Your Going Down.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Again. i could feel it! That was a great poem full of emotion but all i have to say is to maybe even out the lines more...but thats it. great job!
    *~NearlyCrazy6~*

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    Well, this sound like the conclusion to the first poem i read from you. Its yet another heartfelt piece, except this one is missing a bit of the intensity. Its a thoroughly good poem to read, but seems to lack an edge.

    I've seen alot of other poems very similar to this and it doesn't really stand out from the crowd.

    "I'm dealing with what you've to my innocence."

    I think you're missing a word in that sentence.

    Still a very good read and well deserving of the mark.
    [5/5]
    ~Pete.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    5/5 Great poem! I love how you can feel the emotion as you read it ...very well written and i love how you stand up to him!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Sounds like you're describing a serious psychopath, still the darkness behind it is beautiful! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Good!

    Nicely penned, but some lines were not that good maybe, but i think the entire piece flowed out right!

    keep it up!

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