The Other Me

by Shinobi   Sep 25, 2007


Deep inside my body
There are two souls
One is happy and glad
The other one always falls

The sad soul came out
And I was truly sad
Than I talked to you
And made you feel bad

The other me came out before
A long time ago
Than I felt sore
And wanted to take my life and throw

Yesterday you saw my depressed side
I'm sorry, I'm sure it was hard to see
My other side is depressing and sad
Although all the things I said, will you forgive me?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved the beginning and end but the middle kinda confused me. I could understand the emotion and I could relate to your words. In your second stanza, the repition of the word "sad" kinda broke the flow for me. *4/5*

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