Describe me (short poem)

by Alicia Jane   Sep 25, 2007


If i could describe my self,
I'ld be that box in the corner that still isnt filled,
I'ld be the cloud lost in the sky,
I'ld be the star that doesn't shine,
I'ld be the girl you regret dating,
I'ld be the ugly duckling,
But if You could describe me,
what would you say,
would u tell the truth,
or lie too make my day.

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Doesnt sound that good but ii wrote it al 12am.
Mhmm.. comments?
xx

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  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Very interstingly written lol... loved it keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    That's very interesting... I agree with alyssia... you're so beautiful in that profile picture... just keep on writing more... -)

  • 16 years ago

    by Alyssia L K

    That was pretty good... but ur not an ugly duckling....

  • 16 years ago

    by Neo Castelino

    Great work...I hope that was a fiction..