Suffocation (senryu)

by OHgreenman   Sep 26, 2007


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industrial smoke
choking mother earth's essence
killing all beauty

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    So so true! Such a powerful little senryu, Greenie. You are really awesome at writing such short, yet compelling poems. Very awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Powerful and filled with sadness... really effective and truthful piece, greatly written. Simply amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    No thats one hell of a powerful senryu....