Backyard Whispers (Triple Haiku)

by Jenni Marie   Sep 26, 2007


Moon softly smiling
Stars lighting up dark night sky
Red leaves turning gold.

Foxes scurry past
Squirrels chatter happily
Birds sing their sweet song.

Trees swaying gently
Moon's soft pale glow reflecting
Sweet backyard whispers.

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  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Pure imagination. It was easy, clean, and neat.

    Simple yet peaceful.

    However, regardless what other people praise you. I do not think this poem is excellent they are. I believe it is a good poem through my eyes, not excellent.

    The words were simple, still, I like vocabulary. It's just me.

    I believe that you are a very talented poet, far more than me, I do not doubt this truth. But it does seem like something that many poets have already done. Nothing 'new'. [Regardless that it is a triple haiku]

    [Voted 4]

    _Sam

  • 16 years ago

    by Confused Queen

    This is a really great poem
    Great choice of word
    Lovely
    ~Confused Queen~

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