Down With The Rain

by Wake   Sep 26, 2007


If these clouds would sing again
i was willing to save the rain just for you.
And make a river to sail away in,
and find a new home.

'Cause when you told me , if i couldn't change
then i wont be long with you
So i was willing to take the pain
but still , you set sail alone.

I was such a fool for you
I couldn't see the truth
..Falling down with the rain.

I was just another piece
but I was in way too deep
..Falling down with the rain.

If an angel could turn back time
I'd pass by those moments through and through
And tell you , you wont ever be mine
And live happily on my own.

'Cause now i know that I'd fine
if I don't belong with you
but just to get you out of my mind,
cast my heart into stone.

I was such a fool for you
i couldn't see the truth
..Falling down with the rain.

I will never get you back,
and I'm so happy 'cause of that
cant you see it falling down with the rain..?

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Written by Wake

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    This is a very good poem.
    Very emotional, very deep.
    Like it's your own experience..
    Loved reading this piece
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Miss Behaving

    Aww, Don't turn your heart to stone Wake. Its makes it harder to make it soft again :P Yeah, I like it when I can say that I'm better off without someone. I think its better then mopping around sad wishing to still be with the person and knowing that I can't :P I found one mistake. I think you meant to write I'm instead of I'd in this line: Cause now i know that I'd fine. Other than that its perfect ^_^ 5/5 Another Excellent piece!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    It looks like some song, maybe that is just my opinion but it reminds me on song. This piece holds so many emotions and you was really honest. It seems that you put your self in this piece, that isn't a little thing. You described emotions on the very interesting way. Well done!