Pale moonlight

by StonedGooberz   Sep 28, 2007


Bullet sliding into my mind, pushing
deeper inside. slicing the dark
silence in the left side.

tears Ive never felt form to late
to feel. My depression unimpassioned
kiss has become a tainted deal.

my head crashed upon the tortured
sheets from my contorted past. such
disgraceful memories blown out like a
candle at last.

don't worry i float now upon clouds
of fluffy white. until darkness comes
and i will be your pale moonlight.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    That is really good. I liked it b/c it talks about some of the way I feel as well. Great job

  • 17 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Very dark in a way i like

  • 18 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Greatly written, with excellently expressed emotions and very vivid imagery through the whole piece.
    Keep up!
    5/5 from me

  • 18 years ago

    by No one

    Wow, that was good (actually no. it wasnt DECENT!)

    You seriously need to learn some punctuation, comma's are our friends Wes!
    The enjambement is good, it emphasises the meaning of the piece and stuff like, its all distorted and blah. I liked it.. but. COMMA'S MAN!!

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