Rising of the hollow

by ECILA ice   Sep 29, 2007


Zombies ascend from their graveyard
As their pale bodies try to walk away
From the tormented creed

Treading with full of hopes
As they depart from the old cemetery,
Where all the illusions are now buried

With ripped chests,
Taken the organ that supplies tainted life
Ready to end the core of all these sufferings

And with sewed ears,
Deafened themselves from the tempting sound of siren,
No more lullabies that would deceive and hypnotize them

They are now ready to raze their crypt,
free themselves from the devil's den
And dwell in a genuine land that they always yearn...

**this one is for aj..

**thanks to Atticus Maximus Horatius, balnk illusions and sunny for suggesting a title and for correcting my mistakes..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I like it, truly dark and it has outstanding imagery. I don't love zombies that much but you used some truly great words in it and atmosphere is really powerful.

    -And with sewed ears,
    Deafened themselves from the tempting sound of siren,
    No more lullabies that would deceive and hypnotize them-
    ^This stanza is so effective, well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    I think you did an awesome job with this poem. The flow was good and so was word choice. Great Job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikko McMorbid

    So filled with emotions and thoughts. I like this poem. If improved, would be great. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Very deep, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    I thought this was genuinely smooth, joyous, and even a celebration so to speak, i loved the images i found myself walking along side the figures you described...awesome....

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