ITS A GOOD POEM OVER ALL IM JUST NOT THAT FOND OF ZOMBIES BUT IF I DID IM SURE I WOULD LUV IT

This was quite the unique piece, I really did enjoy reading it. A nice title you picked. It suited it well. This was dark and deep also intense creating an eerie feeling over me. I loved the description you used so vivid. Well done on this piece. An enjoyable read. Keep on writing. ~Mel

It was good, but the flow kind of seemed off for me. The descriptions were great and I liked the word choice. It painted a dark picture.

Unique, it gave me cold shakes, zombies really aren't my cup of tea :D. But I think your imagery is amazing and nice choice of words. First poem I have ever read about zombies, really liked it.
Amazing piece!
5/5

Wonderfully dark, and perhaps a bit twisted, the imagery was eerie, yet vivid. the word choice was brillent, the flow was flawless, and the emotion was deep. You did an excellent job on this one, 5/5 although in my mind you deserve more

This is a really imaginative poem lol, wow its really good and kinds of read like a story with a proper ending nice write :D xxx alex xxx

Creepy dude! i like it!

Its really not bad even though i didnt feel anything froem it it was still a nice write

It had good flow and i liked the way that it was structured.
Good imagery throughout and overall a very good job.It wasn't my kind of poem, really., But all in all you did very good!
Love always, Tara-Kay

Great poem..

Dontcha hate one liners?? =P
seriously though...i found it to be a great poem...the flow wasn't excellent...but the words u used were almost excellent..
one thing though..

"As their pale body tries to walk away"
should be
"As their pale bodies try to walk away"
anyways...a 5/5 from me...=]

A couple of the grammar mistakes threw me off but none the less the content of this piece was great. I'm not usually one for zombie poems but something about this one just stood out. You picked the perfect words...5/5

The descriptions in this poem are great, everything is very well described and unlike others I don't dislike zombies. :") I like the picture you form with your words.
The flow could have been a bit better but it's okay overall. Nice.

Dark.

Strong.

Desolate.

I like it. [Vote 5]

_Sam

"And freed themselves from the devil's den
And dwell in a genuine land that they always yearn..."

And is used twice there, right in a row.
It kinda doesn't work out.

Other than that one thing, darling. I think it's a really really good poem.
It has great emotion, flow and such to it.

You did a wonderful job.
Keep it up!

I liked it very much i like dark poems it was very descriptive great job 5/5

I thought this was genuinely smooth, joyous, and even a celebration so to speak, i loved the images i found myself walking along side the figures you described...awesome....

Very deep, 5/5

So filled with emotions and thoughts. I like this poem. If improved, would be great. Keep it up.

I think you did an awesome job with this poem. The flow was good and so was word choice. Great Job 5/5