Sinks Into Deep Depression (Added a Stanza) 10/23/07

by Tabitha   Sep 29, 2007


I can't believe I fell for you,
When all you do is make me blue.
Make me cry till my confession
My heart sinks Into Deep Depression.

There are days when I can't eat
And then those days where I can't sleep.
Every time I think of you,
All it makes me want to do, - Is Weep.

Look into my eyes,
and tell me what you see.
Ask me, " Are those tears of joy? "
Or " Are they coz of me? "

Exulting you was my biggest mistake,
because our love was depressingly fake.
But then most of all, my biggest regret,
was the promise that you never kept.

I can't believe I fell for you,
When all you do is make me blue.
Make me cry till my confession
My heart sinks Into Deep Depression.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nic

    I loved it
    keep on writing

  • 18 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    This poem is filled with emotion...well done. please keep writing and I will keep reading 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Corinne

    Nicely done, Tabitha. Perhaps you could consider
    My heart sinks INTO Deep Depression

  • 18 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow deep deep emotions 4/5 nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Mary

    I really liked this poem it was really sad though. I like the rhyming. Well keep up the good work.

    plz coment my poems
    they were meant to be part 1 and part2
    if u have time <3

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