Without

by Alexander   Sep 30, 2007


Without that constant reminder
Of the ticking clock
I would probably forget
That my life hasn't stopped

Without the constant reminder
Of my beating heart
I would probably forget
That my life hasn't stopped

Without the constant reminder
Of my family and friends
I would probably forget
That my life hasn't stopped

Without the constant reminder
Of the sunny sky
I would probably forget
That my life hasn't stopped

Without the constant reminder
Of the voices i hear
I would probably forget
That my life hasn't stopped

Without the constant reminder
Of everything that surrounds me
I would probably forget
That my life hasn't stopped

But with the single reminder
Of the cold, sharp blade
I will never forget
That my life has now stopped forever

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  • 16 years ago

    by CEE CEE

    I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT THE REPITION EVERYTHING IT FLOWED VERY WELL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK 5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by apey

    Its nice but i find that you used without and that my life hasn't stopped a lot but it was still good all the same and im sorry if i sound like a...................you know :(--------:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    I like the repition of I never forget. Very nice poem.