Where Dead Angels Lie

by Sweet Fragility   Oct 1, 2007


Pictures and a scatter of memories - are a little girl's last swansong
Snow falls gently onto cold ground, in the last place she belongs.

Gravestone adorned with flowers, a snow trampled path that surrounds
A place where she is forever lost and never will be found.

Everyday more innocent lives are taken, more drama to behold
A thoughtless act can end the chance for a life to unfold.

We desire Utopia, where death only strikes those who are old
Yet with each crystal of frost that is falling, another story is told.

All crystals represent another life that is torn away
Sadly proving to the world that nothing gold can stay.

Copyright (c) Sweet Fragility
9/30/07

* "Nothing gold can stay." is a line taken from a poem by Robert Frost. I think it means that you're gold when life in new and you don't have to deal with the difficult things, like death. You see the innocent things, basically. Anyway, that's just my interpretation.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    I like this poem, well written, but it's quite abstract which I like, it get's you to use your noodle. I'm trying to understand the title and how it relates to the poem itself. My guess is that the content refers to abortion who are the angels and innocent.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow... I truly enjoyed in this effective piece. It is excellently written from the beginning to the end, and it holds huge amounts of sadness and beauty. You created very vivid and captivating imagery through the piece.
    My favorite lines are:

    -We desire Utopia, where death only strikes those who are old
    Yet with each crystal of frost that is falling, another story is told.-

    You have great talent!

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, this is a really great poem. It's true that nothing stays gold. It's really good. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    A very nice song. The expression was very good in this poem. The rhyming and structure fit the story line. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Loveless

    Wow, i really love this poem. It's wonderful. ur a very powerful writer. I hope you keep writing more poems...

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