Forever Fading

by Tammie   Oct 1, 2007


I'm anything but everything to you,
Promises mean nothing when they all fall through.
Sweet, but sour words fall on desperate ears,
No hand to hold or to wipe away the tears.

Your welcoming smile melts my heart inside,
Yet your cold words are the reason I cried.
Now I know love is just a state of mind,
The reason for living, of which I can't find.

Forever fading are the memories we shared,
Forgotten like the feeling when I once knew you cared.
I've fallen to the bottom of your list of to-do's,
And somehow I know this game of love, I'm about to lose.

** Not that happy with this one.. but I'm not sure what I was aiming for. **

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  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Great one!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    I thought it was another cliche love poem but i become so judge mental because i found out that this poem is another unique and heart warming piece that you have written.. a simple yet a direct poem, it really touched and melt my heart. nice smooth ending.. it flowed so well. keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by DeadandBleeding

    This is excellent, this piece really flows well and the rhythm is brilliant. I love the imagery you use as well.
    DnB

  • 16 years ago

    by njabulo b

    That a nice poem Tammie- be happy about it- it fantastic and understandable- i like your experssion- 'promises mean nothing when they asll fall through'

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I'm anything but everything to you,
    Promises mean nothing when they all fall through.

    i loved those 2 lines, it was amazing, this piece was so captivating. it was short but had alot of ideas. great work 5/5

    nikki

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