Cutter

by LoveBird99   Oct 2, 2007


Earlier on, we were the best of friends
That type of bond that never ends
We'd share our secrets and stay up all night
We'd be each others comfort when our days werent bright
I used to believe in you, the way a best-friend should
You used to be like a sister, back then, when you understood

I used to trust you, when you didnt lie
It breaks my heart to see you cry
I wish you could go back, to the way you used to be
When you didnt cut, when I didnt have to worry
Your new group is making you this way
Youre changing more with each passing day

I hope this gets better, so then you will see
How much everyone worries and wants you to be free
Its like youre trapped inside captivating bars
Causing yourself such pain until you see stars
You tried it once, and then again
Youve really changed, and I wonder when

You need to realize that youre going the wrong direction
And the pool of blood on the ground...hides your true reflection
Feelings are solemn and morbid, as we drown into this fight
Between anxiety and rage; between wrong and right

How far will this go? How long will it take?
To make you realize that your life is at stake
You care about nothing except power and control
Youve killed your heart and murdered your soul
You cut with blades that are hard and sharp
As you play with your life on the devils harp!

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  • 15 years ago

    by meli

    This is a great poem n every beautiful..good job.=] i hope ur friend is okay..=]

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Ooh,very sad,but sounds like you really care for your friend,hope things get better. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Awww, this was so sadd. I thought you portrayed your feeling about wanting you friend back very well, though. I'm an ex-cutter myself, I know how it destrys people. Great job!

    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Brilliant job with this poem... it brought tears to my eyes.. the way you described it made me see it so vividly... keep it up.. i love your writings.. (maybe there is something in this girls life that is making her cut herself other than her new friends...) 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Wow this was really great, keep it up,
    i've read a couple of your poems now, and they are fantastical, so i was wondering if you could comment and vote on sum of my poems, it would be greatly appreciated.
    I'm new to writing poetry so i need some feedback, thanks,
    Polaroid
    p.s GREAT JOB