Rhyming is gone, just like you-Abi's

This is so heartwrenching...so much melancholy and desperation were felt when reading this piece..and it's something that I can relate to.

Despite being relatively short, the emotion in this piece is overwhelming, without being overbearing.

Imagery was beautifully portrayed and your flow is just perfect.

Beautiful.

The sadness in this piece, of feeling
left alone is just simply amazing,
i loved how it all came together,
nicely penned sad poem, 5/5

The simplicity of this poem, being short with such little words made it so great. It was captivating and I enjoyed reading it.

Take Care.