Water Dragon

by RobinAnn13   Oct 7, 2007


This strong and powerful dragon
He brings beauty to death
you see the gleam of his eyes
as you breathe your last breath

Your life flashes before you
as you lie in the light of the moon
and wait for him to decide
your inevitable doom

lightening streaks through your body
and your heart starts to slow
the dragon is satisfied
as your pain starts to show

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Overall a good poem and its not bad. Good word choice and good flow. rhyming is also good. Tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Well, it flows well. There are some good parts with imagery yet I think by somehow...using less "you's" it'll be better. I do like that the image about the setting taking place at night. I'm not sure but I'm thinking work more on imagery in later pieces and see where that leads to.
    ~Faith-less

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow, short an simple but very well written, Really like it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Elliot Larson

    Nice. I like it.

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