Taking A Chance

by ABake   Oct 7, 2007


I have finally moved on, still scared of what may come.
Can you take away my fear?
Show me what happiness is.
Please, don't cause me to shed a single tear.

More and more my attraction toward you grows.
Do you feel the same?
I am ready to take a chance,
Not mess around or play another game.

I think you're worth it.
So sweetie, don't prove me wrong.
Don't give up or let our relationship fade.
Keep it going, make sure we say strong.

I am not promising love or forever.
Let's just take it one day at a time,
We will see where we wind up.
Right now, I am just glad to call you mine.

[Hehe. A happier side to my work. Lol. Hope everyone enjoys]

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  • 16 years ago

    by aLYNNp

    OMG!!! I love this poem. I had just gotten into a new relationship and I feel that way.

  • 16 years ago

    by LURVE

    That's a really realistic poem.. you know that your love will probobly not last forever, but at that time you have to ejnoy every minute of it.. a really trully like it!! (o:

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    I realy enjoyed its good oem

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was sweet and just awesome. Its good to see something from you that makes me cry because its so beautifully sweet and not because its so terribly sad.
    Love always,
    Tara-Kay

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "your worth it." << you're**

    Hehe. It is a happier side, and I love it. (:
    Your sad poems are good as well, but these just make me smile. Hehe.

    The poem overall was amazing, Amber. Once again, it proves you're a great poet.

    The two questions in the first stanza, though.. would probably sound better as one sentence [[with one question mark]].

    Keep it up darling. (:
    ENDING, once again was great.

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