Dancing on Clouds

by Karl Wild GG23   Oct 9, 2007


Tonight I danced under the stars with you,
Holding you tight, your body against mine,
I've never before felt a love so warm, so true,
The stars may twinkle baby, but you shine.

As we move our feet never touch the ground,
For your an Angel and you dance on clouds,
Our hearts beat as one, it's the only sound,
Take my hand, as we walk through crowds.

Slowly your head turns, soon lips touch lips,
In this moment in heaven, Surely I would die,
You take a step back, My hands on your hips,
Only your love could ever bring me this high.

You light up my life, you light up the world,
A million spotlights don't compare to your smile,
I want you to know, that I love you Baby Girl,
You've made the hardest times, so worthwhile.

As we dance on clouds, night begins to fade,
Your fingertips slowly begin to slip from mine,
I once again thank god for the Angel he made,
As in my eyes, Forever and always, you'll shine.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    That was so sweet....beautiful job on this piece....so heartfelt and passionate....very vivid inagery too....amazing work on this! Keep writing! I have to say, your poems are some of the best I've read! :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Aww this piece was just wonderful.

    Another poem that just made me smile, and I love when poems make me smile, :] The love expressed was beautiful and the images you painted with your words were flawless.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Another 5/5 from you. A favorite now!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Yea. I don't like most love poems, this one included. So I'll comment mostly on the writing style.

    It flows very well, and the lines are just long enough and just descriptive enough to get your point enough. You also have some very creative points that I haven't read before.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like your writing style, you always manage to create vivid and beautiful imagery and to express emotions excellently in your love poems.
    The choice of words here is great, you created truly captivating imagery in every stanza.
    Amazing job.
    5/5

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