Alone

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 10, 2007


Alone
tapped in my fears
Alone
desparetly needing you
Alone
crying all these tears
Alone
Taunted by my demons
Alone
faliing off this cliff
Alone
forever

*This definalty was my worst poem...but i just quickly wrote it down cause i wanted to post a poem....*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Its simply done dotn worry i love the way how u did this poem.. i think the rhyme was enough to show ur talent.. just keep on writing 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    I actually thought it was pretty good. I think you could revise it and make it a really sad and beautiful poem. It was short and I like that in poems sometimes, especially when you get stuck reading a long one. This one painted a clear picture, but It could be better, I would really say go back and revise it

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