by omgitsmina   Oct 10, 2007

Confused is an adjective that
Is the definition of my name
I want to move forward, but
Deep inside is Im filled with pain

I remember what had happened
And I still bear all the scars
Of what your carelessness had cost me
When you took away what was ours

And so, I want to start anew
With someone who truly cares
About me and who I am;
My heart needs to be repaired

I hope that I can find the strength
To finally push forward and move on
To never let you influence me again
To retrieve what had been withdrawn


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  • 12 years ago

    by Tabitha

    Aww, i loved this one! beautifully written! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by XdangerouslyXgenuineX

    Did you purposley not title this or is that because you cant think of a title?
    maybe you could these:
    praying to push forward
    barely getting by
    left with the scars of carelessness

    i personally like the last one,anyway mina this is a great poem!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by shawn

    Yeah, that first stanza basicly deffines me as well lol. I love your poems and especaily the repetitive a,b,c,b rhyming you use, it makes each stanza flow wonderfly. 5/5

  • Good job....hope you can work things out