A Rush Of Wind

by Alissa   Oct 11, 2007


A horrible heart wrenching feeling rests upon my chest,
as i realize the time has come to an end.
Where my wishes and dreams depart
and leave my soulless body

A joy was brought to my life,
unexpected but wonderful.
Creating the annoying hours of sunlight
a timeless session of amazing memories

Like a rush of blowing wind
holding a beautiful scent
you come and go with only a wish,
only a single longing for more.

Dreadful days have returned to me again,
only being the evening of nature itself.
Where happiness no longer exists
and depression has conquered all

But yet, I see you walking by.
Flawless like the angel you portrayed;
only love has slipped away,
the love you promised me.

So i lay here feeling my heartbeat
seemingly like a thousand thudding horses
your memories fly through my mind,
as i sit motionless yearning for you.

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  • It was really great. I loved how much feeling you put into this poem. Keep writing. And don't worry about that lost love... there will be more! I swear to you!
    -Danielle-

  • 16 years ago

    by kristian

    Excellent! Keep writing more poems like this!

  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    I love how you have so much emotion.. its not the kind of poem i usually read.. but it was a great piece you have such amazing talent keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    I have a poem almost parallel to this one, very good work. it had good pacing and format. and it was very well writtern, great job

    your servant:
    atticus

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Aww. it was awesome. i loved they way you have expressed your feelings thats was such a great poem

    my dear,
    you work deserve 5/5