Reading Poems Of Lost Love

by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx   Oct 12, 2007


Reading poems of lost love,she stares at the screen
Fighting back tears,so no one will see

Reading poems of lost love,she's thinking of you
And all the things that you've put her through

Reading poems of lost love,she feels her heart break
Recalling every single horrible mistake

Reading poems of lost love,she's dying inside
Wishing that in your arms she could still reside

Reading poems of lost love,she finally breaks down
Tears hit the floor but she doesn't make a sound

Reading poems of lost love,she's a mess
Wishing that she could think of you less

She exits the poems,she knows how it feels
To exist without blemish but the scars don't heal

She exits the poems,she closes her eyes
She knows it's time to finally say goodbye

She exits the poems,she picks up the phone
Hoping and praying that you're alone

A girl picks up with a giggly laugh,she quickly hangs up
She tries to pretend that she doesn't give a f**k

She sobs for hours, she's in great sorrow
She knows she'll read poems of lost love tomorrow

-CopyRight-AmberPalmer

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved how you structured your poem here. It was quite effective and so was the reptitition you used. Well done *5/5*

    Reading poems of lost love,she finally breaks down
    Tears hit the floor but she doesn't make a sound
    ^beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    Okay, so I hate cussing in poems, but other than that, this piece was very well done. Your last stanza was awesome. And I love the switch in your main words. Good job!
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia

    Wow, it almost felt like I was the girl reading the poems. Probably because I've been there lol. But this poem was amazing, yet sad. I loved it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Ahhh truely amazing. A wonderful idea using the same sentence at beginning give an great effect. It was so sweet, cute and heartbreaking. Just ending ahh aww makes me so pissed off at thouse kind of guys who kinda sick way like hurting. Grrr!
    But poem itself was Brilliat!
    Really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Awwww....this poem is so sad! But it is very sweet and well written! I really like it! Keep up the good work!

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