Connection

I think on this the only thing you can do is to watch yoru flow some of your lines get a little long and some are too short.. so try and fix that and you'll be okay.. o

great job

5.5

Wow i really like this poem it is deep and interesting.
i can't think of anything else to say/write

keep it up
Sam Mayo

This poem had alot of emotions, like many of the other's. However the flow was a little off, and the content got a little confusing.
I like how you discribed them each, however at the end it was confusin to tell who you where calling your..

'Love one, your divine angel from above.'

Just some things to think about.
Still a good peice.
--Elly.

It's a nice poem, but the flow was a bit off. It's really nice though.

4/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Another poem with great emotion. Great read on love and friendship and the struggle between the two. 5/5

marcella