Without You

by XxSabrinaxX   Oct 15, 2007


The days without you
are like voilent roits in my heart

the nights I spend
so cold and lonely without you

the days with you
are like a day in heaven

the nights i spend by our side
are like a night with a god

the times when you are around
i wish they would never end

the time i spend without you
are like time spent in a tunnel
that i can only reach the end by seeing you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    Nice poem with a good choosing of words. Liked the flow. It seems in the poem that you spend more time with him than without him, as you wrote more lines about being with him...
    Nice poem, liked it, though a little to short. 4/5