What You Deserved [Acrostic]

by Pete   Oct 16, 2007


Walked out on me, doubtfully, head for the door.
Hurt me, desert me, I want you no more.
All the time you were mine you tortured my soul.
This time you give back what you tactfully stole.

You find a new love, but one that shoves you about.
Openly hurts you, when that love curses you out.
Unfortunately you're tortured; now nowhere to go.

Damaged lips from the hits are starting to show.
Eyes try to disguise a denied pain which is real.
Serves you so right, despite what you may feel.
Everything that goes round comes around again.
Revel in the reason that you conceal your pain.
Vain in your heart but your pains undeterred.
Ever so amused, you're being abused by a girl.
Damn right, it's a delight when he gets what's deserved.

~Pete.

*Written though the eyes of an Ex-girlfriend.

*An acrostic poem has a word, phrase or name spelled out vertically down one of the edges; usually the left edge. A double acrostic has one word down the left edge and another word down the right edge.*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wow, another very powerful read. This entire piece is word so well nad the emotion is very raw and quite captivating. This is an amazing acrostic. You did a great job with this form. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very interesting piece. Nice job on this one. I like how you wrote from another's perspective. It's a sad piece though.
    Charisma*