REGRETS..

by ECILA ice   Oct 18, 2007


I've been poisoned
by my own set of venom,
and now it's paralyzing
my entire system...

**there are things that i regret.. so the lesson is think a million times before ending up into your final decision.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    Speechless

    just 1 stanza conveyed it all

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Well, it is short, very short.
    But, it's amazing.
    Completely true.
    I'm actually quite fond of it.

    I don't really know what to say.
    it's just, flawless.

    Lol.
    5|5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Powerful words in such a small package...great write...A good lesson to all who read it...valid and easily memorable point. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem, Wow, I can't express how much I loved it. It was short yet so beautifully written because of how it really it. The meaning you portrayed was honest. So much power was expressed here from such small amount of words. Well done. An amazing read. Keep up the great work. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by awww

    Four lines... within those lines you portrayed a valuable lesson.. and since its so short some would read it over and over until they consciously or unconsciously have internalized it.. good job there

    ~angel~

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