Guilty

by Gasttlee   Oct 18, 2007


Guilt
glows goosebumps.

Shakes
strike as brainstorms.

Heads hold hype
turning twisted torment.

Fears
force wandering waves.

Confusion
creeps obscenely.

Hearts
hurt time and over.

Despair
designs your body.

Guilt gives soul
and survivors have soul,
for souls are survivors.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow..this was such a strong poem. I love your style..i would have liked it more if you kept the two line thing gong. But I felt it was still powerful and well written. Keep it up. Shanik

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Guilt
    glows goosebumps.

    Love them lines. You started this off really strong and ended really strong.. The flow of this was perfect, spot on and I couldn't find any flaws within any of your pieces. You definitly interest me with your work.

    5/5 ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Aussie

    I like u get right to the facts:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Goldgal

    This was kind of creepy, but you show plenty of effort and clarity. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    Now this, is extra super cool, worked well in every aspect, it has that same diverse style as some of your others that i like a lot, and this one flowed REALLY well...HELL YEAH....

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