The repitition in this poem made it very unique,,,,liked it though! Keep up the great work!!

Very good it made me sad though if you ever wanna tlk hun pm me im always here for anyone that needs it

This is such a touching heart felt poem! I love the style and the meaning! Good Job

I really like the form of that one, it was really nicley written, lots of emotion, keep it up
5/5
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Very good poem 5/5

I really liked this poem it was sooooo good i loved it!

This sounds like great words for a song, they way it s displayed you can kind of picture someone singing it, i thought it was great write expresses your pain clearly. Good job

Damnnnnnnnnnnnnn! that was sum crazy ass poem boy..it's tight i feel where yr comin 4rm

Sad sad poem.... made me feel so sad.... thats all i have to say.... keep up the good work....
mwa
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It was sad but still very good...5/5

This one is very repetitive. May be good for lyrics... but I think if a poem gets so repetitive than it losses its charm a bit. Otherwise it's good poem.

I don't believe I have seen such repetativeness used so eloquently before good move ,good thought, good poem 5/5

And don't we all wish for sleep (or even die) when things turns upside down..Like mentioned , this poem is very repetitive, but awesomely written. .......almost like a song. Very nice.

Good poem and well penned. enjoyable write!!

LOVED IT

Oh my godd. this almost made me cry. i could feel your emotions pour out of the page, sort to speak. really really good job. lol.

Aly

Hit me deeply. Check out a poem of mine " The Lost Letter ". Theyre very similar, I was stunned. Great job by the way :)

Gosh this is kind of said..but well put together

Aw this is really sad. it has emotion that it very visible throughout the entire thing. it sounds like it could be song lyrics great write ;)

Aw this is really sad. it has emotion that it very visible throughout the entire thing. it sounds like it could be song lyrics great write ;)