Sweet Death..

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 19, 2007


Blood pools around me
My body still and pale
My eyes blank and empty
I'm lying on the floor

Death came so sweetly
Like a theif in the night
Stealing my breath and soul
Taking me to freedom's plight

My razor lays beside me
Blood darkening its blade
The cuts on my wrists wide open
blood trickling away

My ghost left my body
it now haunts the streets
singing a song
about how death is sweet

No matter that I'm gone
I still cry in the dark
when I'm buried in the ground
I'm still crying out for help

The endless pain ended
But the numbness still remains
As i lie in my casket
The coldness still rains

Death is so sweet
It took my life away
Forever i live in peace
But never far from pain

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tripp

    I really liked this. You had powerful imagery and great emotion embedded throughout the poem. definitely a 5/5 from me, good job. keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by DeadGirl AKA Becka

    I really liked this one!! i love how deep u made some of the words and sentences. 5/5