Free me!

by jLegendc   Oct 20, 2007


Crossing to the door
of the depths of love,
When I reached it,
There was no knob...

Dangerous as it may sound,
No other way
could ever be found,
I kicked the door to the ground,
And forcibly went inside to
a love that knows no bounds...

Reckless, I might have been,
I lost my sight
And I thought my soul got
lost in heaven,
Because in the end,
I lost the fight...

The emptiness I have
shouldn't be seen,
The spark of love that ignite,
Was blown away by the
ominous wind of the night...

Leaving me with
nothing at all,
Not even my soul...

Everything has been taken away,
My heart is in darkness,
Cursed to not see
the light of the day...

Imprisoned for eternity,
Locked up in a pitched black room
with uncertainty,
When will the girl who
yields the key,
Be able to free me?

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Very sad,really describes youre feeling well.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is actually really good, it really describes love and sadness well, in a way that is easily relatable to the reader.
    5/5
    gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by ShAnEL

    Nice poem i liked it gave u a 5/5 soo...keep up the work ur doing good :)

  • 16 years ago

    by katy

    I loved this poem WOW very emotional love tht, very sad, keep writin i love them hehe xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Fay

    Hey i really liked this poem, it had a lot of emotion, keep up the good work. Plz comment on mine n let me know what u think.

    Luv Fay :).

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