Comments : These bruises and scares are more than a reminder...

  • 12 years ago

    by Nic

    I love this poem keep up the great work

  • 12 years ago

    by Nic

    I love this poem keep up the great work

  • 12 years ago

    by Nic

    Omg

  • 12 years ago

    by SerenaSoftWare

    That is so amazing
    you can tell you really put effort into these

  • 12 years ago

    by Nikko McMorbid

    I won't praise you. Yeah it's good, and it's full of emotions. But you can still be better. Believe me.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kelly

    Thats very good nice job

  • 12 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    I feel like you wrote what was once on miy mind. :)
    you poeced it together really well.
    i voted and gave it a 5/5
    oh and please return the favor. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Holy wow, Love this poem.
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by FromHeroToZero

    Hiii tabi
    such a long time ago since i heard from you
    how are you?
    Love this poem, and I hope it's fiction...
    x Sarah

  • 12 years ago

    by Nic

    I love ti
    it is so good and i love the structer
    great job

    love nic

  • 12 years ago

    by Tiffany

    This was really sad...but well written.

  • 12 years ago

    by Abu3li

    Really great

    keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Alexis

    That was really good it made me hate that guy

  • 12 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Thats terrible..not the poem,no it's worded very well,and easy to read.Just the way you're treated in the poem..glad to hear you got away.I hope this didnt really happen to you...if it did someone needs to beat the shit out of they guy who did it.Good work,though

  • 12 years ago

    by Always and Never

    This is a really great poem, and i hope its not real. keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Twistd StoRY

    Aw.im so sorry!! thats really sad.my eyes started watering while i was reading it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dennis

    OH wow...
    This was a good poem..
    And I'm sorry for what happened..

    -Denise

  • OMG, I'm so sorry that really happened to you.... guys are real pain in the butt sometimes.... on behalf of all the good guys left.... I'm sorry *cries*

  • 12 years ago

    by schylar

    Very intense, and unfortunatly true. i like that you made it into a poem though. great job!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Mackenzie

    Tabi. that is a wonderful poem. i have never been in a situation like this one but im sorry u had been. excellent poem. i give u a 5/5 all the way girl. keep it up!

    - MackenzieLayne=]