Entering The Afterlife

by Wallace   Oct 22, 2007


The day has come for me to die from this heinous world
And enter in the afterlife priced at a hundred pearls
My being has died, my soul resides, in the fiery abyss
Mine eyes portray, my hearts dismay, failing to exist
For death has scored the forbidden sin granting me the assist

Silence has taken over the passages of my heart
And what's left of it shall only be a worthless piece of art
Death has controlled my soul and turned my ego grim
Here I stand anxiously waiting on my suffering
For now I enter my afterlife curled beneath the devil's wing

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  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Mm. i love the words you chose. they are so vivid. the last line was a toe curler. it was just so strong. the whole poem was. =]
    nicely done.

    because it's not quite my cup of tea id give it the average of my 4 into that five you have. i think that would be more precise. [like what i think you truly deserve.]

    =] i hope that wasn't insulting.

    and thanks for the comment.

  • 16 years ago

    by mier

    This poem is written with such amazing imginary and captivating choice of words... I was blown away by the intense vocab and the enchanting image that is potrayed in this poem...

    A beautiful read...definitely 5/5 from me...

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This is a real good piece of work, the language was really well worded. xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by ALEX

    Holy moly, you'd think you've died before! I really like the way you used words that people use all the time in poems, but you made them sound new again. I think this is a great poem. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Ohhhh...i like it...very creepy dark and strong....very powerful and well written....keeep it up!!!! 5/5

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