Cry

by Cassidy   Oct 22, 2007


Tears streaked my face
even though I tried to hold back .
You said you loved me
only 2 days ago..
what went wrong ?

I tried to focus on something else
as I watched you turn your
back on me.

And no longer are you here.

I tried to pretend I didn't care
as you walked away,
I tried to be as smug as possible.

but everyone noticed my tear
drenched face.

You were always there for me
when I needed you most.
When I cried
you were the one person
who lent me
their shoulder.

I miss those days.

As I walked home from school
on that sunny autumn day
I recalled
my most treasured moments with you:
when our first kiss
was on a day like then, sunny but cool.
I recalled the windy summer day
at the beach when all we did was
laugh and play.

Everything was perfect
but to my surprise
I was never good enough for you .

That is why on that
sunny autumn day
all i could do was
Cry.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "streaked my " << streak*

    I liked the poem.
    The emotion was great.
    The flow was a bit off, but I think that was because of the syllable count and stanza breaks.

    Maybe try more evened out lines and more evened out stanzas.

    other than that you did a wonderful job. (:
    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    A heartfelt poem.... I don't know how that must feel but your poem is very sad :(
    One day I hope that you'll find a guy who'll love you and take care of you and not dump you like him
    Anyways very heartfelt and touching poem

    5/5
    Nadia