The best of lifes promises

by Lorryn   Oct 24, 2007


Thick or thin,
hard times or the hardest,
life's unpredictable,
no matter when you start it.

your a promise from God,
sent from above,
always there for me,
unconditional love.

a shoulder to cry on,
for a friend in need,
your always there for me,
a true friend in deed.

a love so pure,
a love so true,
anything in the world,
id do it for you...

hey feel free to pass this along to your friends,its one of my favorites and all of my friends loved it too...enjoy

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I really like this poem about friendship, well done. I also treasure my friends in my life... They also helped me grew up to who I am now...

    Anyway It was a great poem. Well done.
    You have one minor error though.
    your a promise from (god),
    = God :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    I think this is a simple and beautiful poem of love and devotion to god, good job. in answer to your poem comment, i have heard that meat loaf song but it wasn't connected to this poem but maybe a few others. good point though. comment more sometime, i like your poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia Jane

    Thats sweet,
    might send along too best friend,
    and give u the credit u deserve for it too.
    =]
    xx

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