Lost inside

by twistedlover   Oct 24, 2007


--Lost Inside--

We started out strong,

What the hell went wrong?

You got to know me inside out,

Your the one that told....No doubt.

My life went down hill,

I thought we had a deal.

No one can understand my pain,

I took everything in vain.

Im lost inside,

So many things I have to hide.

Im not finding what I seek,

Emotionally Im weak.

Your the only one for me,

I wish we could go somewhere to be free.

I tend to be full of hate,

And because of that its closed many of my gates.

Theres a saying that says "We change everyday",

For you I dont think that way.

Once again Im lost inside,

I have a connection with those who've died.

Your the most important thing in my life,

If you were to die I'd inpale myself with a knife.

_____________________________________________________

In the end you dont care... and I wont try to make you.

From Me To You

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    This was a really amazing poem! You word choice was really great, even though it was simple. It was very relatable! The flow was great! I could just feel the emotions jumping out of the screen! You are a really talented writer! Great job!

    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow another great poem! i liked it alot and ik how it feels to loose sum one you love so much! but in the end it worked out between me and him so hopefully it will with u and that girl!!!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by babyPB

    Excellent poem. i can relate to every stanza. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I absolutely loved this, it was amazing,
    the way you actually put your words
    together is simply amazing, although
    you use simple words it is still a great
    piece. nice work 5/5

    Your the only one for me,

    I wish we could go somewhere to be free.

    I tend to be full of hate,

    And because of that its closed many of my gates.

    i loved those lines ^^^^

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Sad poem....really good job on this....full of sadness and pain....Keep up the good work with your poems! 5/5

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