A Wilting Rose

by Crystal Gaze   Oct 26, 2007


A Wilting Rose.
By: Elaine.C.

I'm fading.
Like a wilting rose bathed in shadow,
for as the cold seeps into it's stem,
so does the cold seep into my heart.
For as the sun left and abandoned the flower,
so to this day did you leave and abandoned me.
And like the flower once beautiful,
So to was I, but now I'm nothing more,
than a wilting rose, left in the dark,
forever to be alone,
with this heart now made of stone.

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Thanks,
Elaine.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    Wow. great poem. && great imgination. i liked it alot. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexa Eudis

    I like it a lot. great comparison

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Once again a fantastic title that will lure the reader in, the imagery in the first few lines were terrific. Every rose must die someday no matter how well it was taken care of. Amazing job 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by ihrtschlepper

    Its interesting how you chose to display this poem and the whole wilting rose really worked, nice job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    I felt really inspired by this piece..love it 5/5

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