Fading Away

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 27, 2007


Empty
I suffer inside
dying a little more
not much longer alive

Blood is the color
of my skin
when i dig my razor
deep within

Black heart
is mere ashes
burnt and torn
I never had one i have sworn

Death is an escape
I dream about at night
by this wish i know
I am not alright

Crystal tears
build up behind my eyes
I don't let them fall
I don't want you to see me cry

Misery inside
it darkens the skies
makes it rain
each day of my life

I let the razor
numb my pain
letting this high
take me away

I give in to depression
let it swallow me up
Don't want to fight it
because I've gone weak

Each minute is an hour
every day
It stratches longer
as my pitiful life fades away

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Though a cliche topic you pulled it off nicely. Really deep and powerful which created such a depressing image acros my mind. I loved the haunting and chilling effect you painted into the atmosphere really well done. Nice flow within this one. Keep it up ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The images you created here with your words was just haunting. I was hooked and wanted more. The flow was great and the rhymes did not seem forced. So well done. *5/5*

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