Screaming

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 27, 2007


Screams
behind these walls
of my mind
I need you to catch me
because I'm gonna fall
Screams fall on deaf ears
I'm screaming for you to help me
But you don't care
Too scared
To confide
in you
knowing anyone will let me down
too
Screaming
for relief
from my tears
from this ache
for the pain
is getting to be
too much
to take

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was really simple but I believe it portrayed alot of emotion. It was nicely written holding such sadness within each word. I liked the short lines they were really effective though the flow seemed to lack a touch at the start but got better futher down. Well done none the less with this piece. I truely enjoyed it. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh wow this was chilling. I could just envision everything you spoke of and the emotion was easy to relate with.

    "Screams fall on deaf ears"
    ^amazing.

    Well Done *5/5*