Crimson Sky

by FridusBlueheaven   Oct 29, 2007


Title : Crimson Sky
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

Crimson sky, that's how my feeling goes
You might see me fine from head to toes
But deep in my heart, well nobody knows
I'm nobody like before, does it shows

Crimson sky, the trusts are gone with wind
Can't have them anymore along this skin
I'm not looking for the one who to win
Just want to back to place where I should've been

Crimson sky, it's the hardest part to say goodbye
Different from what it should, well could I deny?
I don't know the truth, I keep asking them why
Can't have the answer, I don't have another try

Crimson sky, seeing red as you used to be
I thought it was somebody else but it's just me
The heart and soul are no more my property
If I had it all in the mess, well I'm so sorry

2007 Blueheaven Entertainment (c)

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  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    There are a few mistakes, but overall it was pretty well written, so I managed to look over the mistakes and appreciate the poem for what it was: beautifully thought out, and enjoyable to read.

    Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    The are some mistakes in grammer here. Although that, the choosing of words is unique here and the description of your emotions as crimson skies really passes the idea. Overall nice work 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    You do a really great job at rhyming like i said. Your flow runs along very smoothly. Excellent job!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    I really mean this when I say this, wow you have a very interesting and well written style to your work, I like this piece, actually I love it. I really love how it's very deep yet it doesn't drag on and on.
    Auna

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow...amazing poem. Loved it. Very deep and descriptive. And i love the title...its very unique! :) Keep up the good work!!!! 5/5

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