The Pain Subsided

by Joshua Grider   Oct 29, 2007


Life was nothing without you.

I spent every waking moment by your side.

Not a care in the world for anything but you.

Now I realize that was a mistake.

You changed into a person that I could not love.

For I thought you were the one.

I left you in the curb with with your other special "someone."

You went behind my back so many times.

I gave 4-5-6 7! different chances.

I made a mistake, mistook you for someone else.

You hurt me so bad.

But that was in the past.

For I am not in pain anymore.

I'm too smart for that.

I deserve better than what you gave me.

I am strong!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    God emotion.
    I liked it a lot.

    keep up the good work:)

  • 16 years ago

    by chind

    I really like this poem.
    can relate to this.
    its really strong and the flow was nice.
    5/5

    xo.cindy

    ps. thanks for the comment on mine =]

  • This is a really great poem and it had great flow. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna Rose Kat

    Aww I think I know why you wrote this one... Its really good though. I like it alot :)

  • 16 years ago

    by LilMissLN

    It was a great poem.
    Nice flow and very well written.
    5/5
    Keep it up.